Saturday, 19 March 2011

(Esmee) this to shall pass (Mi's side)

So yeah this is a chapter that i am really not that sure about. Opinuions would be great as i can delet this and come up with somthing better. So yeah please leave comments or e-mail me or somthing if you can


This to shall pass

I stopped sobbing eventually but It took a while. And even after the sobbing stopped the tears still continued dripping from my sore swollen eyes. Emmet cried too My pain hurt him, my tears made him cry as well and the hours he just spent with me wailing like a little girl into his chest must have been his own kind of personal hell. Saying all of this though Emmet didn’t mind tears. In fact he openly encouraged them he new that a person living a life with out tears was not the happy one that people most expected but normally the saddest, the most lonely and ones with dark secrets. Cutting, drug abuse, Alcoholism, eating disorders and more. The crying almost never walk to the side off a cliff and jump, the ones complete with tears normally hover enough to be talked down. The smiling happy ones that act contented are the ones that normally draw no attention as they stride to the cliff side and with out any time to look back walk off of the edge into oblivion. In their eyes the end of thee life was nothing to cry about it was just the end of the pain. So even though the sound of me being upset hurt Emmet he didn’t mind the tears. He new that it was just a moment and it would pass.

3 comments:

  1. I actually love it. 'A person living a life without tears was not the happy one that people most expected but normally the saddest, the most lonely and ones with dark secrets.'So true, I liked this chapter :).

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  2. R-Jay beat me to it!
    This chapter is really true- In their eyes the end of thee life was nothing to cry about it was just the end of the pain.

    That bit really made sense to me. :)

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  3. Keep it. It's so true and so well written.

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