weh, A so so chapter i think. I don't supose it is terrabel but it is not a work of genius either. What do you think?
I am alos so about the jumping around between point's of views but this is the only way it will work right now really so please bare with.
(Esmee’s POV) Emmet’s Extremes
“Do I need to take extremes?” Emmet asked gently resting his head on my shoulder before pulling my body back closer to him across the floor. It sounded strange but I liked it at times when he used his extreme size to pull me around. I new him well enough by now that he would only ever use it to protect me or love me never to hurt me.
Smiling slightly at the comfort I got from being close to him I snuggled back in closer to his chest where I could her his heart beat firm and strong another massive comfort considering I had just spent the roll as heart beat for someone else. His beating alone and strong meat that he couldn’t leave me. and for a moment I thought I could sleep there in his arms.
“Ez. Answer me. I will if I have to but I want it to be your choice not mine. You know what you need. Listen to your angel.”
Emmet was obviously on about the conflict that was about to happen in my head where I would have to fight between the devil and the angel within me and that was exactly what I did. the devil immediately decided in a shout that it would be better for me to run away from every one that loved me and “deal” with things in my own way. The angel on the other side was not as loud. She had never been able to scream what was right at me all that loud but after all this time I had learnt to tune out the devil and hear what she had to say. Her advice was usually a lot better and I took it.
“Yes.” I mumbled softly hating the words what I was saying. I new what Emmet’s extreme’s where well and I hated nothing more then him taking them. He also hated putting them in place. They had only ever been used five times before in the whole of are marriage but tonight they where needed again. So from that moment on I had effectively been put on red level observations in my own home. It was a sad night.
I actually like it when you are jumping around between the characters. It's more interesting to read, not that it was boring when it was only Mis POV. Mi only was awesome, now with Em and Ez it is super awesome ;)
ReplyDelete^ what they said.
ReplyDeleteI love reading from Em's side. it give it a whole new dimention- and it does work.
You could always imangin puting dates in so that at the start of the chapter we know the month and year- that way flash backs dont have to be stated.